Wednesday, March 12, 2014

English 1A "Savage Inequalities" Paper/Final Draft: It Rains On My City


Samuel Jimenez
Professor Monique Williams
English 1A
12 March 2014
It Rains On My City
A dark cloud covers a city filled with drugs, violence and a failing school district. Despite the efforts of gentrification, the misery produced by the dark cloud is still evident, especially in the schools. But less than one mile and an overpass away, the sun shines brightly on one of the most affluent neighborhoods in the nation. A neighborhood filled with wealth, where students thrive and one of the nations great academic institutions calls home. The grass is greener on the “west side” and all you have to do to see the difference between East Palo Alto and Palo Alto is cross over that overpass. Ask yourself, who creates these imaginary boundaries in our society and how could it be that all that separates one of the wealthiest zip codes in the nation from a neighborhood with two of the lowest performing schools in California is just an overpass? My research of this topic, aided by the reading of Jonathan Kozol’s “Savage Inequalities”, part of Paulo Freire’s “Pedagogy of the Oppressed”, Erich Fromm’s “Disobedience as a Psychological and Moral Problem” along with watching Davis Guggenheim’s “Waiting for ‘Superman’” documentary about the American public education system, led me to the belief that instead of failing neighborhoods producing failing schools, in fact, failing neighborhoods, like East Palo Alto, were produced by failing schools. In a society that’s growing rapidly, I believe that it is all of our obligations, as a society, to help reform the system that leads to these failing schools.
Within these failing schools are children who, despite their, at times, troubled upbringing and familiarity with negative influences from their primary socialization, show promise and enthusiasm during their early years in education. Young children, because of their innocence, have yet to realize the inequalities in our education system at this point in their lives. Although the problems of our education system exist in these early years, it isn’t until later that the effects of these issues are immediately noticeable through the child’s grades. Father Michael Doyle, pastor of Sacred Heart Church in North Camden, illustrates this innocence in Savage Inequalites, “’It rains on my city,’ said an eight year old I know, ‘but I see rainbows in the puddles’” (Kozol, Pg. 180). The loss of innocence begins later on. In Guggenheim’s documentary “Waiting for ‘Superman’”, educator Geoffrey Canada says “Between the 5th and 7th grade, you see a huge number of minority students go from being ‘B’ students to ‘D’ students” (Guggenheim, Waiting For Superman). Kozol’s book “Savage Inequalities” backs up this thought by saying, “By fifth or sixth grade, many children demonstrate their loss of faith by staying out of school” (Kozol, Pg. 70). A state of unintelligence didn’t suddenly take over these students. They just became aware and they became conscious. They became conscious of the inequality that they face in the broken educational system and, in turn, became disinterested in education. German sociologist Erik Erikson illustrates this sudden consciousness in his epigenic principle. The epigenic principle is a formulation, which states that humans develop through eight different stages in life. Most 5th through 7th graders fall into the epigenic principle stages of competence and fidelity. They begin to ask themselves if they are competent and also begin to question who they are and what surrounds them. They find the answers to these questions by looking at their surroundings.
In those stages, children become increasingly aware of what they lack and in the case of a city like East Palo Alto, in comparison to Palo Alto, or as illustrated in Savage Inequalities, a town like East St. Louis in comparison to the near-by Fairview Heights, they also become aware of what others have. The difference in environment can take a toll on these children as they begin to establish their own identity. Los Angeles-based rapper, Nipsey Hussle, speaks on this in his song “Crenshaw and Slauson” as he raps, “The demonstrations speak loud, so I ain’t sayin’ much. Was a charismatic nigga, now I don’t play as much, because life is real when you live it in a place like us. School pictures crackin’ smiles, now my face is stuck, shell-shocked to see how much they really hated us” (Nipsey Hussle, Crenshaw and Slauson). The loss of charisma, or their own smile, is realistic for children from failing schools. As they begin to see how the education system neglects them, they begin to question what is left for them to smile or be excited about at school. It becomes a decision of whether or not school is giving them the gratification that they desire, and if it is not, they begin to seek alternative forms of gratification that are, many times, available on the block.
In order to combat the calls of the street life, the child must look differently at the scenario they have been born in to. Instead of feeling like there is no way out of this cycle the system has created for them, they must begin to find something within the school to cling to. If the system won’t change, we must help change the perception of the scenario for these children. Paulo Freire says in the “Pedagogy of the Oppressed”, “To do this authentically, they must perceive their state, not as fated and unalterable, but merely as limiting and therefore challenging” (Freire, Pg. 9). We must help them to look at these failing neighborhoods and failing schools as a challenge waiting to be overcome. A challenging state is not impossible to break out of. As a society, we must build these children’s identities to be that of challenge seekers and challenge defeaters.
To break through the wall, the challenge, put in front of us, we should be looking to not only highlight the avenues currently available for our children to succeed, but also create new avenues for them to succeed. We shouldn’t limit the options our children have as students. We should be challenging them to find new ways to succeed and to pursue what they find joy in or have a passion for. The problem begins with the fact that, “Sports and music… are for many children… ‘The only avenues of success’” (Kozol, Pg. 31), as the chairman of the Illinois Board of Education observes in Savage Inequalities. As a firm believer in both sports and music as tools to help build confidence in young people, I believe that they’re both very much-needed in urban communities. They should not be the only avenues available to students, though. Compton rapper, Kendrick Lamar, notes “My mama didn’t raise me up to be jealous-hearted, like most of the winners call it. ‘Regardless of where you stay, hold your head and continue marching,’ that’s what she said but in my head, I wanted to be like Jordan [or] award touring the country with money from mic recording. The only way out the ghetto, you know the stereotype, shooting hoops or live on the stereo” (Lamar, Black Boy Fly). As positive an effect music and athletics have on some children, they must also be aware that there is more available to them. They can’t be aware of that possibility if the possibility does not yet exist for many of them. Whether it is through expanding arts programs, enhancing the use of technology or undergoing a complete reform to project based learning, creating and providing students with more avenues will only lead to greater success.
Savage Inequalities speaks about the lack of resources available to students many times. When comparing New Trier to the schools in South Side Chicago, Kozol notes that New Trier students have up-to-date technology, three separate gyms and multiple studios for dance instruction. Much like many of the students in Hayward, Oakland and East Palo Alto, students on the South Side of Chicago don’t have those same resources available to them. Kozol also comments on how “…children in one set of schools are educated to be governors; children in the other set of schools are trained for being governed” (Kozol, Pg. 212). But as Father Michael Doyle, illustrates in Savage Inequalities, “When you’re on your knees, you take whatever happens to come by…” (Kozol, Pg. 179) With the lack of opportunities to pursue something different, a child has little choice but to seek success through “shooting hoops” or making music. It’s either “the block” or the gym, and as for the 8-year old child Father Doyle talks about seeing rainbows in the puddles of rain falling on his city, we must ask ourselves “How long will this child look for rainbows?” If we don’t offer our children more outlets and avenues to pursue a successful life, they will likely be another dropout statistic dropped into a failing neighborhood. Our children will become blind to the rainbows they once saw and will only see the dark cloud left hovering above them.
The lack of resources is a major issue that failing schools face but we should seek to use the resources available to us to stimulate the minds of children. Whether it is the use of a child’s cell phone or using a simple two-by-four, we should be attempting to use everyday materials in innovative ways to teach students. As adults, we learn everyday through our interactions with the world and with other people, and we should aim to structure the education of our children in much the same way. CEO of High Tech High, Larry Rosenstock says “You can study the world through almost anything” (Rosenstock, Project Based Learning at HTH). He provides the example of learning a lesson in capitalism by studying a simple two-by-four and how it grew to be much smaller than it originally was. We run into similar examples in our everyday lives. Everything in our world should be able to teach us something and despite the lack of certain tools immediately available to students in failing schools, we should attempt to take materials that are available to them and turn them into a teaching lesson.
The use of the resources readily available to us is evident when looking at the Landfill Harmonic. Through the use of garbage, literal garbage, they are able to build functioning instruments, such as, violins, flutes, cellos and others. Being able to turn another man’s trash into a ready to use treasure can provide children with an avenue for them to cling to. A young member of the Landfill Harmonic says of her violin “I love playing my violin because you can convey anything.” (Case. Landfill Harmonic Amazing and Inspirational) Through the use of another person’s garbage, she’s able to convey her thoughts, emotions and feelings into art. Although this may be extreme to some, it shows that if we truly want to, we can use anything to convey anything. It may take an innovative mind, but the possibilities are endless when we tell a child to create something out of almost nothing. We just have to give them that power.
Other solutions are not always free, though. Especially when the issue of being able to pay teachers comes up. To connect more personally with the book, and better understand this issue, I sat down with Lorin Eden Elementary School (a school at which I coach basketball) principal Kim Watts, to talk about the problems facing Hayward schools and possible solutions. The first solution she offered fell in line with Camden High principal, Ruthie Green-Brown’s first priority as she told Kozol, “My first priority, if we had equal funding, would be the salaries of the teachers” (Kozol, Pg. 175). Watts talked about compensation for teachers being the biggest issue facing Hayward public schools. She explained to me that the best teachers are able to think innovatively and differently, but as illustrated in Savage Inequalities, the difficulty is not always in hiring good teachers but in retaining them once they become a known commodity. Without having the ability to compensate these good teachers, the task of retaining them begins to seem nearly impossible.
It then becomes an issue not of who is more deserving, or in need, of that teacher, but who is able to pay them more. It isn’t always the case, but the thought that everyone has a price isn’t completely untrue, and as a good teacher continues to grow, it is likely that they’ll be offered more comfort financially in a different school. Without an increase in funding, it becomes nearly impossible to retain these teachers. Kozol points out that “Investment strategies in education, as we’ve seen, are often framed in the terms: ‘how much is it worth investing in this child as opposed to that one? Where will we see the best return?’” (Kozol, Pg. 141) With the thought that a child from a more successful neighborhood can provide the education system, and society as a whole, with a better return on investment, we leave children from failing neighborhoods with a failing approach to their education. In an interview with Roses in Concrete, educated Jeff Duncan-Andrade says “The radical disconnect between the intensity of those experiences in the lives of urban youth, and the kinds of things we are focusing on attempting to teach them and measure their learning around is so ridiculous. The ways in which we approach schooling in this country, with poor kids, particularly poor kids in urban environments would never be tolerated for middle class or wealthy children.” (Andrade, Andrade on Education “I teach my neighbors kids.”) We have a system built on inequality where the tolerance levels for what is acceptable for wealthy children is extremely different from those of children from failing schools. What’s acceptable for Longwood Elementary would never be acceptable in Castro Valley, but it’s a system that, in a sense, is doing what it was built to do. Putting a system in place where we can financially reward teachers for positive results would provide failing schools with an equal playing field.
Our system of education was built during an era of industrialization, in which it was meant to prepare students to take on different roles in society. The problem is that our schools have remained the same while the world around them has changed. The job market has changed but we are still preparing students for the same roles we were preparing them for many years ago, whether those roles exist today or not. But as Paulo Freire says, “Knowledge emerges only through invention and re-invention, through the restless, impatient continuing, hopeful inquiry human beings pursue in the world, with the world and with each other” (Freire, Pg. 1) Our education is going through what sociologists call “cultural lag”, or, the tendency for elements of material culture to change more rapidly than elements of nonmaterial culture. While our world becomes increasingly dependent on the fast-changing technology industry, our education system falls behind. Principal Watts suggested looking at major tech companies and seeing what their staff rooms look like and then restructuring some classes to reflect those staff rooms. The idea is to restructure our system to properly educate students on today’s technology while also readying them to fill the current needs of our society.
Restructuring a system that still benefits the wealthy is no easy task. Being a catalyst for change is not always welcome; especially when many are comfortable with their situation or feel that the system is working. A willingness to be a martyr, of sorts, is necessary for the system to change. In “Waiting for ‘Superman’”, former Washington D.C. Chancellor Michelle Rhee says “There’s this unbelievable willingness to turn a blind eye to the injustices happening to kids every single day in our schools, in the name of harmony amongst adults” (Guggenheim, Waiting For Superman) We can either continue to turn a blind eye, or face the problem head on. “To be in favor of redistribution of resources and/or racial integration would require a great deal of courage—and a soaring sense of vision—in a president or any other politician.” (Guggenheim, Waiting For Superman) It will take an act of disobedience to positively impact the failing schools, and as Erich Fromm says in “Disobedience as a Psychological and Moral Problem,” “In order to disobey, one must have the courage to be alone” (Fromm, Pg. 686). We must have courage to make a change in the system. We must have courage to give children the best that we, as a society, have available to us, whether it means going against the popular opinion or standing alone against other adults. It may take a step out of the comfort zone for many, but it’s a necessary change if we want to see our education system turn around.
The system is failing many children and whose obligation is it to help these children in failing schools? Principal Watts believes that “it’s the obligation of everyone to restructure the system” (Watts, Personal Interview). Not just the principals, teachers or the parents alone. It’s everyone’s obligation, as a society, to help other people’s children. If we continue to turn this blind eye, our schools will continue to fail and, in turn, our neighborhoods will continue to fail. We must change the mindset of our children. We must challenge them to overcome the obstacles set in front of them so that they do not give up as they reach adolescence. We must provide children with more options, more avenues for success. We must make the most of the tools available to us. We must give failing schools a better opportunity to retain successful teachers. “It rains on my city,’ said an eight-year old I know, ‘but I see rainbows in the puddles.” So whether it is East Palo Alto, Hayward, East St. Louis, the Bronx or any other troubled neighborhood, we must keep those rainbows alive for these children. We must provide them with the opportunity to step out of that dark cloud, and to reach the pot of gold at the end of those rainbows.

Let ‘em reach up to the clouds.
Can’t eat if we don’t feed ‘em. Can’t read if we don’t teach ‘em.
There’s no light if we just hide ‘em. Don’t just let ‘em die.
Let ‘em shine.
Let ‘em shine on.












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